The Screenplay(Script)

.Slugline= INT/EXT , location, time of day(add-on specifics , eg 1920's flashback, moving car, dream)

.Action= describes necessary details (AV) and what is happening at the moment

.Character names( dialogue) = always in CAPS

.Parentheticals (in brackets)

Title : Time Revolution 

In the year 2251, genetic alteration has allowed humanity to stop aging at 21. 'Time Revolution' which happen in the another dimension of the world called 'Devonshire Time' . After the news was released on earth, Human beings starts to migrate into the new dimension'Devonshire Time' as they want to live forever at the age of 21 but without noticing there are always a bad side. In 'Devonshire Time' they currency are actually 'Time' which can be transferred among individuals on body-contact, is displayed on a clock implanted in people's forearms. When the clock reaches zero, one dies instantly. In that society is divided by social class living in specialized towns called 'heir achy zones'

24 year old contraction worker Damon Kalsa lives with his mother Jane in the hettogys(poorest among Heir Achy zones) One day, Damon saves 119 year old Fernando Billy from a time robbery assault in a bar. Will rescues Fernando, who tells him how he no longer even desires life in saying' your mind can be spent even if your body is not'. Later at night, Fernando transfers 119 years to sleeping damon keeping 10mins for himself, which he has time only for him to walk to the bridge and suicide. Damon woke up with his 'Time' with 119years, Damon when to find his mother to save her from misery working but she was murdered by 'Posh Ville'(Highest in Heir Achy zones, Richest people) bank boss due to her wanted to get her pay. After Damon found out that his mother was murdered, he spent half of his 'Time' just to get into 'Posh VIlle'.

Damon met Jennifer in a tense gambling table showdown where damon beats her father in poker with only a minute to sparse on his clock, winning a thousand years in the process. Jennifer invited Damon to a party at her father's mansion.

At the mansion, Damon is apprehended by Kein, who confiscates all of his time, spare him 1 hour. Damon then escapes by taking Jennifer as hostage. Returning to hettogys with her, he drives into an ambush of RevolutionKeepers(the cops). Out of desperation, Damon called Jennifer's father demanding for 5,000 years ransom for Jennifer. 

The following day, Damon discovers that Barson( Jennifer's father) did not pay the random, but decides to let sylvia go regardless but Jennifer refused and willing to stay with him. They came up a plan by robbing the 'Time bank' which are own by Barson. They begin a series of Time Bank robberies, stealing Time capsules which store time equivalents and distributing them to the poor. WIll and Jennifer disrupts the system of the bank which the poor get richer and the rich get poorer.

After a few years Damon and Jennifer decided to return to Earth and start over again…

Homer's Night Out

-1 sentence story idea - 'Homer get caught and realized that after all wife is still the best '
-1 sentence plot summary - Simpsons family have a nigh tout which Homer Simpsons went for a boy's night and ended up his son catching him dancing with a lady and the news spread.
-Synopsis - A fine day Homer Simpsons went for his Boy's night with his friends, his son caught him dancing with a girl with his spy camera. Late at night, his son printed the photo and started to distribute out to everyone in the town which includes his mother. Dispute went out she chase Homer Simpsons out of the house. After a few days, Homer Simpsons realized that his wife is still the best .
-3 Act Structure - Homer went for a Boy's out . Was caught by son's camera which Homer was dancing with a girl . Homer was chase out of house by the wife, live was miserable.  Homer realized that his wife was the best after all. Homer apologized in public and he reunited with his family.

week 4 synopsis & 1 sentence pitch

(p3 – work – typed, 12pts, double-spaced)

Genre	1-Sentence Pitch	Synopsis
Fantasy	1)Crystal Croft in an Egyptian tomb, seeking a diamond at one end of a chamber 2)A eleven year old Akusa and her parents are moving when her father take a wrong turn and found an abandoned amusement park. 3)A witch who decides she wants to be normal and moves to Los Angeles to start a new life and becomes friends with her neighbor 4)Helena works with her parents at their family circus but series to run away and join real life 5)Eisenhelm leaves home travels the world and perfecting his craft and return as a master illusionist	A member of a rich British aristocratic family, Crystal Croft is a " Grave Digger" who enjoys collecting ancient artifacts from ruins of temples, cities . worldwide, and doesn't mind going through death- defying dangers to get them. She is skilled in hand to hand combat, weapons training and foreign languages and does them all in tight outfits.

Action adventure

1)In 15th century Milan, a dashing swordsman named Ricardo'Montolivo finds himself at odds with the powerful forces taking over Italy, and he set out to avenge the murder of his parents 2)Danny Favouritem, a young america officer, celebrates his engagement fiancee. 3)Captain Peter Babary is ordered to pursue the Spanish privateer Fernando and Pink, Kens or take her a prize. 4)In summer of 206, during the Delian Dynasty , the imperial army led by chancellor Panini embarks on a campaign to eliminate the southern warlords Danish and Delvino. 5)An alien spaceship crashes near New Orleans, and Detective Sun Clean from Defense Department set a trip to seize the ship and search for passengers

In 15th century Milan, a dashing swordsman finds himself at odds with the powerful forces taking over Italy. He sets out to avenge the murder of his parents and find his country cleaved by chaos and civil unrest.

Science Fiction

1)Genetic alteration has allowed humanity to stop aging at 21 'living time' , which can be transferred among individuals on body contact 2)In the year 2108, a future earth is infested by Demons, alien life forms capable of killing humans by physical contact. 3)In the year 1022, Dr.Christopher killington is a young inventor invented a time machine 4)There is 4 children that acquired telepathy skills which they call "the sensor" 5)In the year 2050, A guy was hit by a car and was saved by a eccentric doctor which changes the heart of the injured guy to a battery

A voiceover describes the state of the world. A place where time has become currency. As scientific advances people can stop aging at 21, but it comes with a catch, after reaching 21 a person is genetically engineered to live only one more year. The time is used as currency , you can earn more at work but you sell it for goods and other services . Once the time runs out, you die.

Horror

1)A young woman on a train eyes a nervous , In a flash she slices him in half 2)A ban loan officer was being cursed by an old lady after she denied her for extending the mortgage loan 3)A group of friends wandering around a graveyard and found a 'devil diary' stated that who shall free thy soul will requited with a power beyond their worth. 4)In Canada on a facility in which rich clients pay to torture and kill kidnapped victims, Damon & Cain went into the center without knowing that nightmare is going to happen 5)A couple chose to migrate to a quiet place to live for their rest of their life but they never knew that the place they are staying was haunted by a boy

One night, two friends named Johannan Magda & Peter Johnson are shown wandering around a graveyard. Lightning strikes a headstone, and when the smoke clears,they find a book without a name at the base of it. Peter Johnson opens it to find that the pages contain no writing except for a message inside the book's cover that reads: " who shall free thy soul will requited with a power beyond their worth ". So Peter Johnson decided to bring the book home as he believed that fate has meant for him to find it.

Mystery	1)Peter Kain is contemplating whether to cheat on his fiancee and needed advice so he called Holmes Kin, a young singer but he receive a phone call instead in the phone booth by telling him not to leave the phone booth if he want his life 2)Seven years after tracking down serial killer Pane Deliah FBI agent Downing Will found out that there is another hannibal around the area which actually was her boyfriend, Damien Helton 3)Secret agent , Samuel Morses tracking down the Illuminati 4)IN 1953, two U.S marshals Dicapro and his partner James tomkins travel to the Ashecli Hospital for the criminally insane on Flussy Island located in Hilton Harbor 5)An unnamed English ghostwriter is recruited to complete the memoirs of former british prime minister Pierce McGreogor.	Peter Kain , an arrogant WashingtonDC publicist who is contemplating cheating on his fiancee. He called Holmes Kin, a young singer from a phone both on the street. When a mysterious man interrupt his called. The caller says that Peter should have not cheat on his wife as it would have "kept his strength up for what comes next". He warns Peter not to leave the booth. Peter, again dismissive is skeptical toward the mystery caller

3 ACT STRUCTURE

1 sentence summary for mulan, the money pit & tampopo(crazy scene)

Mulan - The Fa family's only child, tomboy Mulan, fails to fulfill a Chinese girl's traditional duty as desirable bride,decides to fight for her country and the honor of her family

The Money Pit -A young couple sinks their life savings into a house that is falling apart to the extent that it no longer has a main stairway or water.

Tampopo(crazy woman scene)- A crazy old lady destroying all the squash able food that she can find in the super mart which was own by a man.

What makes a good story

What makes a good story?

In a story you need Theme, Plot , Story structure ,Characters ,Setting ,Style&Tone. We need to 

know who is the protagonist , and what does he or she want? In the beginning of the story , what 

morally significant actions has he or she already taken towards the goal?

Why all the above I mention are important to make a good story? Because the theme of the story 

illustrate what the author want to deliver to the readers. As for plot, it shows most often about a 

conflict or a struggle that the main character goes through. Thirdly, story structure is deciding about 

writing the story either in "first person" or in "third person" point of view. Characters is one of the 

most important element to make a good story, as it should be someone readers can feel something 

in common with. And now its setting, setting is to set the story in a place and time that will be 

interesting or familiar. Last but not least, style&tone. Style&tone are to use the most suitable 

language that feels right for the story and use actions and speech to let readers know what's 

happening by showing not telling.